Monday 18 August 2014

After critique

After a peer critique, i shortened my tagline as it was unnecessarily long.

Then after all the issues I've been having about getting my tagline to fit, Lee had the brilliant idea to switch the placement of the two to make it flow better. I've been playing around with composition to try to get it to fit with the switched lines.




I felt that the centered type didn't really work anymore (I wasn't really a fan of it before anyway) so tried lining up the type with the point of the box. it created this really interesting assymetric composition.



i also found that cropping it to print A2 left me with this dynamic version of my poster. I might pursue this a bit further?




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