Tuesday 12 August 2014

After interim 2

I've been having a few issues with the tagline, so I though of reverting back to using amazon as my example of a superstore. I feel though after reasearching some more, that amazon's guilty of less brutal crimes than that of sweatshops, and it doesn't quite match with the bloody handprint. I will have to think of a better tagline for walmart, it needs to be something that would reflect the brutal impact of the blood like abuse rather than pay.

In the interim people also thought that the sub-text would work better centered as the rest of the composition was centered so i tried it out.



Tried one not as factual...



http://bits.blogs.nytimes.com/2011/09/19/inside-amazons-very-hot-warehouse/?_php=true&_type=blogs&_php=true&_type=blogs&_php=true&_type=blogs&_r=2

https://upworthy-production.s3.amazonaws.com/nugget/4ff6a22ccae5b5000300589e/attachments/amazon-infographic.png

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